Saturday, April 26, 2008

Cycle 1 Auditions -- Judges' Comments

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rotogold

Aked

B/W: Why are you sad? There is a feeling of questioning in your eyes. A typical pose I would say but not bad. Just casual. One more thing, you could do more on your hair.

Color: Now that is more like it. I like the confidence. No fuss in the pose. The eyes are really prominent. I do not know if the clothes are relevant to the theme, but they do you good. Nothing much , except that you are plainly posing for us without much effort.

Bastard2

B/W: Now, what could I say? Definitely, a wonder. I like the bitchiness. I like the care-free attitude. Definitely, you will be in the running.

Color: That’s what I call a model. You are wonderful in this photo. Everything I see is cool. There is confidence in the close-up shot. The oversized spectales is a little bit nosy but what the heck , you can pull off a stunt. Great Work!

CeEJhAy_10

B/W: I would have to be honest. I am a sucker for a body like yours. We do have our own prejudices, right? Anyway, I like the way you nodded down. There is a flirt in you telling us in black and white, hey look at me. Maybe next time you could show us more fierceness. A model must have the necessary attitude and you are definitely one. This photo is a teaser.

Color: Ironically, this one is contrived. Yes, you are trying to play sophistication to the end, but it is amiss. Overall, you let your eyes play with us. You are talking to us. I like the lips. They are definitely a plus for you. As for the theme, maybe you are businessman on a trip in a snow-laden country. In the middle summer, I just felt suddenly cold? Overall, you are safe here.

claydoh

B/W: I have seen this picture before and the shot is too near. Anyway, you have that look that deceives. There is no much expression felt in that close-up shot that will make you really exceptional. I have a feeling that you have not made any effort to take another shot of you in black and white.

Color: Cool. The very natural flair of the shirt you’re wearing fits you in. But you are so informal in that get-up. Must think that you are a businessman having a break. The shot is becoming of you as you now look like a model in this photo. Clean shots, but having survived the last GNTM, you should know what it takes to become a model.

crazycrepe

B/W: Suave. A very simple pose speaks huge of what you really are. There is a child in you waiting to speak up, and you are projecting that very nicely. Au natural!

Color: Now that’s what I call a “model’s” pose. Very clever. You are very cool and relaxed in your pose. Clothes are perfect for an everyday businessman in action. Your photo shows some action. Great shot.

eizo

B/W: You are daring. You know what your assets are. The effect is simply outstanding. But there is one thing lacking. Your eyes. You are not talking to us. Make us aware that you are there.

Color: There is a story in this photo that many can relate to. A very simple shot of someone doing a deal in a cocktail setting is one hell of a concept. You are really a businessman. Very cool.

hard_hot

B/w: I am listless at what I see. There was no effort at all on your part to project the model on you. It was just an ordinary black and white shot of you. I am missing a projection of a model-like figure in the photo.

Colored picture: Now there’s the model. In your very simple way, you exuded elegance wearing a modern suit. There is no escaping the look in your eyes. “You are talking to us.” I do not know how to gauge you, but even if I do come across you in a formal meeting, I will be totally in awe of you. There is one lacking though. You are still not yet comfortable in all of this. Maybe in the succeeding cycles, you will be able to project more. Overall, this is acceptable.

james jay

B/W: Practically typical. But you shine in black and white. You could have been more challenging if you had worn a more desirable outfit. Showing the best in Black and White is difficult unless you truly exude the X-factor.

Color: You look better in black and white. I do not see any redeeming factor in your colored picture. Your black and white rendition of yourself is more apt. Maybe your attire will win points, but the model isn’t just there.

john ralph

B/W: You, as always, know how to project well. You simply use your natural talent to present a very simple pose that really speaks of yourself. You are a cover boy material and everything that I see in your black and white photo is a person who can be many other persons at an instant. Truly, in your simplicity, you projected excellently.

Color: Now I am having problem with your pose here. There is not much to affect me to endear you to me as a businessman. You depicted arrogance as if you are modeling only for the yuppies. You are more than a student rather than a businessman in your photo. The tough stance is okay. The background is just appropriate. The business attire may not suit you well, but your total demeanor is quite novel such that I see great promise in you.

lannz

B/W: I like the hat. I like the pose. I like your teeth. I like the diagonal presentation. I see a model material. But you seem to be lacking in depth. Despite the strong jaws. But you are definitely safe here. You are cunning.

Color: You are too far away. You are not even business-like in your stance. This is just an ordinary shot of someone going on an out-of-town beach gimmick. Nothing much to show.

Malificent

B/W: There is such sweet depiction of a debutante in your black and white photo. But I got distracted by the wings on the background. But then, and I say it honestly, you are a teaser! A very good projection in black and white which is difficult to achieve. An outstanding projection, I may say because I like how you speak with your eyes. They are flirting! The finger is just an accessory but your eyes are doing it well.

Color: I do not know how to take this. A businessman in the shrubs? I like the stance but where is the business? You must command respect in a business suit. You must make people buy a business suit and who would your audience be? It will be mostly the middle aged guys who have the moolah to purchase the suit. But being playful on your shot will make the buyer think twice before purchasing the suit, because the first thing that will enter his mind is this MUST be a casual suit. Honestly, the vines did not blend into the total picture. It is somehow misplaced.

mrdreamboy

B/W: Prominent jaws. Lights to sharp. Background undecipherable. But you get attention. You know how to look without looking. You are a flirt. To me, you are in for this round.

Color: Now that’s a model. Problem is you were very casual. The stance says it all. But you are too young to pass off as a businessman. And the youthfulness shows. With hairs highlighted? That would be like saying Fernando Zobel de Ayala wearing a Tee with his hair colored. I like the way you look into the camera. You are teasing with the lens. Subject matter wise – you fail. As a model, again , this is safe. There is potential.

Onyn is here

B/W: Though blur, and I think that this was done intentionally, there is some mystery in you. I like the way you use your eyes to look into a diagonal direction. You are playing with you. And with your arms raised near your neck, you are making us fell at ease. Some stiffness, but I simply like the stance. A model material.

Color: I guess this is how you would really look in color. You are packed with action. Without much effort you are a doer. Though not in a strictly business attire, you have conveyed that you meant business. I like the deception. You know your art and your business and it shows. You have great projection.

sexiest18

B/W: I am confused. A part of me is saying that I like your shot. Another part is telling me that there is something wrong in what I am seeing. The photo first – it is weak in a sense that it does not do you justice. Is it because you lack the subtlety in posing as a model? The shot/pose itself – I like the concept. Had this been taken very wisely and artistically, it could have come out better. But I am ambivalent on this photo.

Color: Come on, do I need to comment on this? Everything I see is wrong. And I do not know what to say at all.

warlocke

B/W: I like the attitude. I like the childish smile. Simple, Clean. I like the projection. But there is something missing. The model is simply “simplish”. Safe photo.

Color: Now this is different. I like the daring, the carefree. Nawala lang ang business concept. There is a character in you that we want for you to continue. You could have removed the necklace and wore something more “business-like” in lieu of the necklace, like a watch, or a tie, in your bold presentation. One thing I like, you know how to project.

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toyan

Aked - looks like a yuppie.. young professional.. good job.. but.. the way u project.. seem like ur stucked in elementary

Bastard2 - the theme is "strictly business" everything wud've been ok.. if u just took off those shades.. its very informal.

CeEJhAy_10 - well the scarf looks hot.. but.. its a picture not worth rememberin.. it didnt made a lasting impression to me..

claydoh - good .. but not great... outfit is good.. the background is so-so .. the problem is.. ur not able to put up a facial expression of how a real businessman wud be reactin like..

crazycrepe - I LOVE IT!! the background is cozzzy.. antique chair.. nice outfit.. and the idea of makin business calls.. but... the only thing that i domt like is his facial expression... u cudve atleast shown a sexier and fiercer facial expression

eizo - uve just shown a pc of cloth. .. ..

hard_hot - nice attire.. and the way u stared... it cuts so deep.. the watch is a plus point!! keep it that way!.. nice projection too..

james jay - everything is nice..specially ur attire.. except for the background... obviously.. its somewhere in the corner.. i dont like it.. u should have chosen a better background.. seems like ur in an empty apartment

john ralph - Congratulations.. uvr sticked with the theme.. and uve done it well.. nice backgorung.. projection and choice of clothing considering the color combnation.. and.. dude.. the hotness is there..

lannz - can't see the relevance of the background to the theme.. the theme is "STRICLY BUSINESS" not.. "OCEAN ADVENTURES"

Malificent - i love the burberry hat... but hey... u dont look like a businessman... ur more of a poser.. tryin to sniff weeds.. u shudve chosen a better background... the theme is strictly business.. not .. indulgence nature,, but yeah i love the burberry hat.. i mean it.. hehe

mrdreamboy - again STRICTLY BUSINESS... yeah wat ur wearin is something that a businessman wud wear.. but not in a conference or a business meeting... maybe on a dinner date with sum1... stick with the theme.. be strict..

Onyn iS heRe - the backgroung is good.. really good!! love it big tym.. but.. it looks like ur not so comfortable with what ur doin.. cmon.. I would have thought that u got diarrhea... I love the outfit.. next tym fold the sleeves properly its "STRICTLY BUSINES" not STRICTLY RAGGED

sexiest18 - uh oh.. im giving credit.. for the costume.. yeah.. definitely its what a business tycoon wud wear.. but the the biggest loop hole is.. the model hus wearin it... im sorry.. it didnt matched... the background.. i think its poor.. the skin tone of the model and the background... they oppose bigtym... a fish and a bird cud love each other.. but.. how will they live together?? thanks to the outfit.. it saved u.. and im sorry to say.. the make up.. it doesnt look good.. it looks like a combination of H2o and Johnsons baby powder.. no offense...but the only thing that went right is ur attire...

theTruCallin - the background is blurry, orangy to reddish color of polo shirt and jeans... wers the theme?? its not in ur outfit... and not in the background... ur projection saved you.. love it... full of confidence... if only uve chosen
the ryt attire and background u cud have been on the top5!

warlocke - portrayin a very sexy businessman.. i hope its really a businessman that u r portrayin not a gigolo.. yeah but its good..

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